Clarity in Writing
Aaron Bridges
Purpose:
The purpose for the concept
of clarity in writing is to help students realize what they can do to make
their own writings clear, concise, and ready to be read by others. The value of clarity in writing is more valuable
than most students understand or realize.
Many students are so quick to start writing that they neglect the task
of planning and organizing.
Materials:
-Piece
of student’s writing, first draft
-Blank
sheets of paper
-Pencils
and pens
-Examples
of unclear writings
-Overhead
projector
Time Allotted:
Approximately
20-40 minutes
Objectives:
6.01-
Model an understanding of conventional written and spoken expression by:
·
Using phrases
and clauses correctly, including proper punctuation
·
Applying
correct language conventions and usage during formal presentations
Students apply a wide range
of strategies to comprehend, interpret, evaluate and appreciate texts.
Script:
First I’ll start off the class by asking the
students, “Have you ever been misunderstood because you were unclear?” “What do you think about clarity in writing? What does it mean to have clarity in your
writing?” I will record the classes’
responses on the overhead or the board.
I will wait for their responses and acknowledge their answers. “Clarity
in writing is established when the reader is aware of the author’s statement
and his or her purpose. Many times
writers will confuse the reader by injecting opinion into the piece; this can
trip up the reader and cause the reader to misunderstand the point of the
message. After waiting and listening to their answers, I’ll reinforce the idea of BREVITY! And how it can greatly increase
the understanding of your message by saying what needs to be said and not
continue to dwell and not confuse the subject.
I will ask students to
examine their first drafts in front of them; they will then review their papers
and underline all pertinent information.
Hopefully they will be able to underline most of their papers, however
if not, I will ask them to fill in an outline with their points that are most
needed, to show them what they need to improve on.
One of the best practices in clarity
is to use a writing plan. A plan is
called lot of different things, but I know it as a writing plan. A basic plan helps one organize their
thoughts before they begin writing their paper.
A writing plan may seem juvenile or more “lower-level” for a lot of
middle grades students; however, it is a great way for them to plan the paper
and organize their thoughts. Here is an
example of a simple outline. You’ll
notice that there is no introductory or conclusion paragraph; this is because
once the main ideas are established, it is easier to
create the introduction and conclusion.
1: Main
idea of paragraph
a: supporting
sentence
b: supporting
sentence
c: supporting
sentence
d: conclusion and
segue
2: Main
idea of second paragraph
a: supporting
sentence
b: supporting
sentence
c: supporting
sentence
d: concluding
sentence and segue
3: Main
idea of third paragraph
a:
supporting sentence
b: supporting
sentence
c: supporting
sentence
d: concluding
sentence