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Active vs. Passive Verb Forms

Amy Steelman

Fall 2003

Grade Level: Eighth Grade

Time Needed: 20 Minutes

Materials: Chalk/Whiteboard

Chalk/Dry Erase Marker

Worksheet

Purpose:

To help students identify the differences between passive and active verb forms. The purpose is also to allow students a chance to practice recognizing these verbs so they can hopefully find them in their own writing and begin to write in a more complete active voice than a passive voice or mixture of both.

Standards:

North Carolina Standard Course of Study:

Competency Goal 6: The learner will apply conventions of grammar and language usage.

6.01 model an understanding of conventional written and spoken expression by: using verb tense that is appropriate for the meaning of the sentence.

Script:

Good morning class. Today we are going to talk about passive and active voice. Can anyone tell me an example of a sentence using active voice?

I ran.

Well, yes. But why is that in active voice and not passive?

Because there’s action.

Not exactly, but good attempt. That sentence is said to be in active voice because the thing doing the action is the subject of the sentence and the thing receiving the action is the object. A better example is, “I put the book on the table.” Now, you may better understand if I also give you an example of that same sentence in passive voice to let you look at the differences. If I were to make the sentence, “I put the book on the table” (Write the sentence on the board.) passive, I would say, “The book was put on the table by me.” (Write this sentence on the board as well.) In the passive form, the thing receiving the action is the subject and the thing doing the action is the object. So, instead of me being the subject, I am now the object of the sentence. Does this make any sense?

No.

Okay, let me write these two formulas on the board and we’ll try some more examples until you feel comfortable with recognizing the differences in the two voices. (Write on the board:

Active voice: [Thing doing action] + [VERB] + [thing receiving action]Passive voice: [Thing receiving action] + [BE] + [past participle of verb] + [by] + [thing doing action]

So, looking back at the first example, using this formula, what is the, “thing doing the action” in the first sentence?

You.

Your right. It’s me. Okay now, what is the verb?

Put.

Good. And the “thing receiving action”?

The book.

Alright, you got that one easy enough. Now let’s look at the second sentence. What is the “thing receiving the action”?

The book.

Okay, and where was the book in the first sentence? And what part of speech did it represent?

At the end. The object.

Good. Now where is the book in the sentence and what part of speech does it represent?

The beginning. The subject.

Very good. Now going back to the passive formula. What word represents the “be” verb?

Was.

Good. And the past participle of the verb?

Put.

And the “by”?By.

And what about the thing doing the action?

You.

Alright. Now that you have broken down the first example using the formula, let’s try some more examples. How about these two sentences: “Sarah washes clothes.” and “The clothes are washed by Sarah.” Which one is given in passive voice and why?

“The clothes are washed by Sarah” because the object is in the place of the subject.

You are right. The doer, Sarah, has become the object, and the doey, the clothes, have become the subject. Now can anyone think of a time when you would want to use passive voice?

No.

Well, sometimes writers use passive voice for effect and other times you might use passive voice if the object of the sentence really is more important than the subject. Alright, let’s try some more examples. What about the sentence, “Rachel combed her hair”? Is this sentence passive or active voice and why?

Active because the doer is doing the action on the object.

Very good. Now what about, “The book is often read by students”?

Passive because the book should be the object not the subject.

Good. Let’s try one more. “The grass was mowed yesterday by John.”

Passive because the doer is in the place where the object should be and grass is in the place where the subject should be.

Alright. That’s good. Now, I am going to hand out this worksheet and I want you to work on this independently. I want you to read the instructions and follow what they tell you to do about the passive and active sentences. (Pass out worksheet.)

* Wait for all students to finish.

Okay class, looks like everyone has completed the worksheet. Now we are going to go over it as a class. Please correct any mistakes you have made so you can use this as a study guide for passive and active voice. Okay, who knows the answer to the first question? Yes, ____?

Active?

Yes, that is correct. And the next question?

*Continue this until you have reviewed the entire worksheet.

Alright class that was very good. Does anyone have any questions for me?

No.

Good. Now, let’s get started reading the your novels.

Relationship to Needs of Young Adolescents:

Young adolescents still need structure and slow progression into new subject material. Some are also still timid to try new things and make mistakes, so by going over several examples as a class, they should feel more comfortable when asked to do some practices on their own. Also, the words, “Practice Worksheet” should help ease some of the tension and apprehension some students might feel towards writing down answers that could be wrong. Going over the whole thing as a class by selecting volunteers also caters to adolescent needs by recognizing that not all students feel comfortable sharing with the class, especially when they know they could have the wrong answer.

Resources:

www.ncpublicschools.org

http://www.englishpage.com/verbpage/verbtenseintro.html

http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/grammar/g_actpass.html http://www.english.upenn.edu/~hbarbacc/teaching/passive.html

Active and Passive Voice

Practice Worksheet

Read each sentence carefully and decide if it is written in passive of active voice. Write either “Passive” or “Active” beside each sentence.

1. The girls went to the store.

2. The cat drug in a mouse.

3. The house was cleaned by Mom.

4. Some of the children brought crayons.

5. At the game, the ball hit her in the arm.

Read the paragraph carefully. Assuming that it should have been written entirely in active voice, underline all of the sentences that are written in passive voice. At the bottom of the page, rewrite the sentences you have underlined in active voice.

The other day, I received a present on my front doorstep. It was sent by my grandmother. There was a big red bow on the top of it and, “Happy Birthday” was written all over it. I opened the packaged. What was inside surprised me. I had never seen such a wonderful present. The present was taken out of the box by me. I held it in disbelief. The good presents are usually picked out by me. But this time, my grandmother had picked out the best present of all.

Active and Passive Voices

Answer Sheet

Read each sentence carefully and decide if it is written in passive of active voice. Write either “Passive” or “Active” beside each sentence.

1. The girls went to the store. Active

2. The cat drug in a mouse. Active

3. The house was cleaned by Mom. Passive

4. Some of the children brought crayons. Active

5. At the game, the ball hit her in the arm. Passive

Corrections:

My grandmother had sent it. *Students may have some

I was surprised by what was inside. variations to these sentences.

I took the present out of the box.

I usually pick out the good presents.