Work Those Verbs!

(Word Choice)

Kate Pascoe

 

Purpose

 The goal of the minilesson, Word Choice, is to motivate students to use stronger, more effective verbs in their writing.  Rather than relying on adverbs to help the readers see the action, good writers should pick verbs that can stand alone.  Students will become more proficient with their language and their writing will become enhanced after this lesson. 

 

When? / Impact for Young Adolescents

This lesson would be a wonderful one to do at the beginning of the year.  It is a skill they should learn very early on to become better at as the year progresses.  Each writing assignment should reflect this lesson.  Students will best appreciate this lesson if taught at the very beginning of their writing journey. 

Young adolescents are such impressionable people and constantly want to become better at everything they do.  Knowing they can become better at a skill for writing will easily gain their attention.  The teacher must inspire their students to work toward improved word (verb) choice and render it something very important for good writing.  Encouraging them to listen to peers, parents, media and other communicative sources that use strong verbs when speaking will allow them to hear the difference in ‘effective’ word choice and ‘weak’ word choice.

 

Objectives

NCSCS: 6th grade, 7th grade and 8th grade

Competency Goal 6: The learner will apply conventions of grammar and language usage.

 6.01 Demonstrate an understanding of conventional written and spoken expression by:

·        extending vocabulary knowledge by learning and using new words.

·        choosing language that is precise, engaging, and well suited to the topic and audience

 

Materials

Overhead projector or chalkboard

Newspaper

Highlighter

Colored pencils

Paper

 

Time to Complete

Beginning lecture: 5 minutes

Activity: 20 minutes

Follow-up Discussion: 5 minutes

 

Script

Hello wonderful students!  Today, we are going to learn about the importance of good, strong, powerful verbs in our writing.  Does anyone know why we should spice up our verb choices? (Allow students some time to respond with their own ideas.) Can anyone think of a verb that really catches your attention or paints a descriptive picture of an action?  (If students have trouble, give them the example of “construct” rather than “made.”  Discuss with them how made is unexciting, but how you can envision someone constructing something.  This example should help to get them started.)  Now I am going to write some verbs on the board with a helping adverb, and I want you to tell me a better, stronger verb to use in its place.  (The verbs beside those on the left are some examples if they get stumped, and also to include if they do not mention.)

           

Walked unsteadily ------- staggered

            Walked softly--------------tiptoed

            Yelled loudly---------------shouted

            Punched furiously----------pummeled

            Held tightly-----------------clutched

            Said softly-------------------whispered

            Beat wildly------------------pounded

 

Now class, can you see why the verbs on the right are much better to use than the verbs, combined with adverbs, on the left?  Can you see the words on the right more clearly?  Can you picture what is going on more vividly?  The verbs on the right are more precise and forceful.  Using this kind of language will make your writing much more effective.  It will draw a clear image in the reader’s mind and help make your writing more concise.

Last, I want everyone to get out the newspaper you were given at the beginning of class.  With a partner, look through the newspaper articles and advertisements and highlight or the strong verbs you see.  Then, I want you to go back and circle with the colored pencil all the weak verbs you see.  On a separate sheet of paper, write a better verb for the one you circled.  Write one we can visualize! (Allow students about 10 minutes to do this.  They will enjoy working with a partner and scanning the newspaper for any weak verbs they can change.  Adolescents love to show off when they’re right!  After about 10 minutes, have students share what they have found – strong and weak verbs.)

Alright class, what have we learned today about word choice when using verbs?  From now on, in your writing, be sure to use this skill.  I want to see good, strong verbs CONSUMING your papers!

 

Additional Resources/Follow-up

 

Muschla, Gary R. Writing Workshop Survival Kit.  The Center for Applied Research in Education.  New York, 1993. p. 149.

 

A great follow-up for this would be to have students select a piece of writing they have recently written and pull out verbs they could make better or circle verbs they think are strong.